Petal ran through the trees silently and blended in, just another shadow. She spotted a black cat and an orange and black cat, and crawled forward to investigate. She saw that the smaller orange and black cat was weak, and saw her chance for prey. Petal darted forward, low to the ground, and prepared to spring, her prey unaware of her presence. (How 'bout they haven't met yet?)
Petal flashed forward, jumping onto the smaller cat and hearing the satisfying sound of her fur flying. (She hasn't done anything bad... YET) She whipped around and growled as a black cat appeared, flattening her ears. "It's MINE."
Night yowled. How could that cat try to kill the kit?! He jumped forward and ripped at her pelt. He pulled her off of the kitten and threw her onto the ground.
Petal growled as he tore the kit off of her, but smiled as her threw her to the ground. "Protector of the weak, huh?" she teased, jumping up and throwing herself at him. "It's still MINE." she raked his pelt HARD and tripped him, causing him to fall, then launched herself at the trembling kit again.
Night got up again, fury in his eyes. He yowled as he bit down on the she-cat's leg. HARD. He tossed her against a rock, and then pinned her down underneath him.
Petal merely shrugged her bleeding leg off, having endured much harsher treatment. Being tossed against a rock? Fun! Being pinned under a weaker cat? Infuriating! She hissed, slashing at his underbelly and causing blood to pool out. She watched her quarry get away and her eyes blazed with anger.
Night jumped back angrily, pushing Petal onto the ground with the force. "Why?" he asked. "Why do you attack weaker cats? Is it fun? Is it enjoyable? What would you think if you were that kit? You'd be terrified."
"Why do you protect them? This is a harsh world we live in. Eat or be eaten. You just let my only food of probably..." Petal said ruthlessly, pondering. "Probably... the next moon or two!" she gestured to her ribs, jutting out of her sides, her pelt thin and matted, seeming stretched over her bones. "Now what do I have to eat? YOU? It's not like we can hunt anything else." her eyes glittered with malice.
"I hunt many other things. There are plenty of animals that come out during Leafbare." Night sat down, calm now. "If you want, we can join together. It's easier to hunt together rather then alone."
(how about petal attacks him after he says that? or what ever u wanna do!)
Night growled and slammed his body against petal's. He pinned her down, so that she couldn't move. He glared into her eyes. But slowly, his gaze grew soft. 'She's beautiful,' he thought. "I can't kill you, or harm you, any more." He meowed to her. "You are too beautiful." With a sweep of his tail, he ran into the forest to save the kit.
Night growled as he heard Petal crashing after him. he ran faster. He saw the kit. He swooped in and picked her up. Then he raced faster until he reached his den. He got in and put the kit down. "i'm Night." He mewed softly. "Who are you?"
"Hi! What's your name? I'm Rain, and the cat down there is Marsh. Our kitty pet names are Fluffy for him" she pointed to the long-haired, furry Marsh, "and Blu for me. Stupid, right? Our twolegs have NO imagination."
(Ok) "Cool." the blue-furred cat mewed. Just then, Marsh jumped onto the fence. He licked Rain on the head. "Hey." he noticed Freckle, and his eyes narrowed. "Who's that?" Rain laid a tail on him. "She's Freckle. Freckle, meet Marsh. Marsh, meet Freckle."
(I dont know) Freclke looked at March.She shook he head."Oh no no no.I dont hunt,My mother says she knows how and i would like to learn."then something poped into her mind."Hey!Marsh can you teach me?"She asked
"Mice. Rabbits." He grabbed a huge rabbit and tossed it at Petal. "Take it. It's my apology for taking away your prey. He turned away sadly. That was all the prey he had!
Night hissed. "Why don't you clear off, then. I'm offering all of my current prey to you, and you just toss is away into the dirt?" He growled. "You disgust me."
Whirlstorm lowered into a crouch as she opened her mouth and smelled a rabbit, but the scent of cat was stronger than the rabbit,Whirlstorm was wary of the other cat. She couldn't tell who it was so she crept slowly toward the scent of the rabbit. Whirlstorm was about to pounce when a blur snagged the rabbit right out from in front of her paws, but by the time she jumped up to strike the cat, it was gone, taking her rabbit with them.
Helina stepped back out into the sunlight, Darren at her side. Darren was holding the rabbit. "Looking for something, Whirl?" She smiled. "Yes, it's me. That sad little kittypet begging for food when I was l lost in a snow storm. And what did you do? You left me!" She lashed her tail, and she and Darren began to circle Whirlstorm. "But now I'm a trained, lean cat, good enough to get my revenge."
Whirlstorm looked up at the two kittypets, hissing. She said plainly "Ha, lets see who is better then." She snarled at the two red maine coons. "Shall we?" Asked the grey and white she cat.
Whirlstorm pounced at the Red-orange cat with her claws glinting deadly as ever in the sunlight. She hissed as she grabbed the She-cat and pulled her to the ground with full force.
Helina just grinned at Whirlstorm's move. She threw herself at Whirlstorm's face, making Whirlstorm jump back. Then she leaped on top of her, raking her claws on her back.
Hissing in pain whirlstorm lashed out with on paw and swept helina's feet out from under her. Whirlstorm leaped back and glared at darren, daring him to attack her.
Helina rolled her eyes. "Think I'm gonna give up that easily?" Helina whispered in her ear, not even a whicker length away from her. Then she shoved Whirlstorm toward the ground, then flipped onto her and began to tear at her belly.
"Whirlstorm yowled in pain as she said "ha you think a little scratch will slow me down!" Whirlstorm thrust her hind legs out and sent the rouge flying. She leaped up and pounced on helina, pining down her hindpaws and ripping at her belly fur, just as she did just seconds before.
Whirlstorm hissed and kicked out her hind leg to scratch the red she-cat's muzzle. Darren on the other hand recieved a bite to the neck. Whirlstorm had no mercy for a lowly rouge.
The scarlet stained pelt of the grey and white warrior circled the two red coons. Snarling she lashed out at both Darren and helina, on fore arm each and then rolled under then and turned around still anticipating a recoil.
"Hmmm." there is no defeat, no yet." She Lashed out Biting helina"s jugular And glaring at darren as The Rouges blood spilled. Sadly, Whirlstorm said, "To bad, but there had to be a winner."She padded away and didnt look back. She knew Helina wouldnt survive long without a real medicine cat.
Helina hacked, coughing up blood. He eyes glazed and she gaged. She wailed a high pitched, screaming wail.
Darren ran to his sister. He watched her helplessly as she coughed up more and more blood, until his sister's eyes glazed, still and lifeless. He yowled to the heavens, his eyes full of sadness. With careful aim, he slowly cut open his own throat. He lay down as he died.
At the same time, a beautiful young loner gave birth to kittens. Two of them were red maine coons.
Whirlstorm took a quick look back to see them both lying lifelessly on the forest floor, then she ducked behind a bush and continued to pad toward the general vicinity of Mossclan.
Rain and Marsh ran through the forest and saw their friends. "NO!" Rain screamed. "HELINA!" Marsh ran over to the lifeless she-cat. "No, not Helina". He moaned softly, then stood up. "I will find their killer and have my revenge." He spun around and stalked away. Rain looked back at her friends before following reluctantly.
Whirlstorm saw a blue-grey she-cat and a brown tom standing over the two cats that she used to know as friends. She sighed and tried to forget the whole incident.
Honeydew looked around the forest, her ginger fur glowing in the light. The she cat scented the air and then started running towards the river. There were a few voles there and she licked her lips, smiling. Silently, she crept towards them, and then suddenly pounced. She killed them all with one swift bite and then buried them for later.
(Yay!)
ReplyDeleteNight padded through the forest. He looked around.
ReplyDeleteFlick mewled, so weak that she could barely walked.
Petal ran through the trees silently and blended in, just another shadow. She spotted a black cat and an orange and black cat, and crawled forward to investigate. She saw that the smaller orange and black cat was weak, and saw her chance for prey. Petal darted forward, low to the ground, and prepared to spring, her prey unaware of her presence.
ReplyDelete(How 'bout they haven't met yet?)
(ok)
ReplyDeleteFlick wailed again.
Night pricked his ears as he heard a wail. He started running towards it.
Petal flashed forward, jumping onto the smaller cat and hearing the satisfying sound of her fur flying. (She hasn't done anything bad... YET) She whipped around and growled as a black cat appeared, flattening her ears. "It's MINE."
ReplyDeleteNight yowled. How could that cat try to kill the kit?! He jumped forward and ripped at her pelt. He pulled her off of the kitten and threw her onto the ground.
ReplyDeletePetal growled as he tore the kit off of her, but smiled as her threw her to the ground. "Protector of the weak, huh?" she teased, jumping up and throwing herself at him. "It's still MINE." she raked his pelt HARD and tripped him, causing him to fall, then launched herself at the trembling kit again.
ReplyDeleteNight got up again, fury in his eyes. He yowled as he bit down on the she-cat's leg. HARD. He tossed her against a rock, and then pinned her down underneath him.
ReplyDeleteFlick mewled and ran away to hide.
Petal merely shrugged her bleeding leg off, having endured much harsher treatment. Being tossed against a rock? Fun! Being pinned under a weaker cat? Infuriating! She hissed, slashing at his underbelly and causing blood to pool out. She watched her quarry get away and her eyes blazed with anger.
ReplyDeleteNight jumped back angrily, pushing Petal onto the ground with the force. "Why?" he asked. "Why do you attack weaker cats? Is it fun? Is it enjoyable? What would you think if you were that kit? You'd be terrified."
ReplyDelete"Why do you protect them? This is a harsh world we live in. Eat or be eaten. You just let my only food of probably..." Petal said ruthlessly, pondering. "Probably... the next moon or two!" she gestured to her ribs, jutting out of her sides, her pelt thin and matted, seeming stretched over her bones. "Now what do I have to eat? YOU? It's not like we can hunt anything else." her eyes glittered with malice.
ReplyDelete"I hunt many other things. There are plenty of animals that come out during Leafbare." Night sat down, calm now. "If you want, we can join together. It's easier to hunt together rather then alone."
ReplyDelete(how about petal attacks him after he says that? or what ever u wanna do!)
(good idea! haha >:) )
ReplyDelete"Together? With YOU?" Petal spat. "No thanks. I can hunt on my own." her eyes shone with fury and she swiped at him in anger.
Night growled and slammed his body against petal's. He pinned her down, so that she couldn't move. He glared into her eyes. But slowly, his gaze grew soft. 'She's beautiful,' he thought. "I can't kill you, or harm you, any more." He meowed to her. "You are too beautiful." With a sweep of his tail, he ran into the forest to save the kit.
ReplyDeletePetal growled. The nerve. She sped after him then launched herself into the shadows, determined to catch her prey.
ReplyDeleteNight growled as he heard Petal crashing after him. he ran faster. He saw the kit. He swooped in and picked her up. Then he raced faster until he reached his den. He got in and put the kit down. "i'm Night." He mewed softly. "Who are you?"
ReplyDeleteFlick shook in fear. "i-i'm Flick."
Petal cursed herself and treaded lighter, following the black cat's scent.
ReplyDeleteNight sighed. 'Why does she have to hate me?'
ReplyDeletePetal picked up her pace, arriving outside of a den, and waited.
ReplyDeleteNight opened his mouth and scented the air. He smelled the she-cat. "I know you're there." he meowed calmly. "You may come in."
ReplyDeletePetal hissed softly and went in.
ReplyDeleteNight turned to look at Petal. "What do you want?"
ReplyDelete"I want it." she told him, gesturing to the kit.
ReplyDelete(Maybe they should make up or something? I don't know :P)
"First, it's a girl. Second, her name's Flick. Third, no."
ReplyDelete"Why not?" she hissed with impatience. "What else am I supposed to eat?" (Maybe Flick should tell her off :P )
ReplyDeleteFreckle sat at her fence and looked out at the forest she meowed for her mother Sapphirewillow with no replay
ReplyDeleteRain looked over her fence at Marsh hunting. She sighed. So much blood. Though it WAS better than twoleg slop.
ReplyDeleteFreckle spotted Rain."Oh hey!"she meowed
ReplyDelete"Hi! What's your name? I'm Rain, and the cat down there is Marsh. Our kitty pet names are Fluffy for him" she pointed to the long-haired, furry Marsh, "and Blu for me. Stupid, right? Our twolegs have NO imagination."
ReplyDelete"Hi im Freckle."Freckle meowed my mother is somewhere in tat forest her name is sapphire(She dosenyt know what her mother dose)
ReplyDelete(Ok)
ReplyDelete"Cool." the blue-furred cat mewed. Just then, Marsh jumped onto the fence. He licked Rain on the head. "Hey." he noticed Freckle, and his eyes narrowed. "Who's that?" Rain laid a tail on him. "She's Freckle. Freckle, meet Marsh. Marsh, meet Freckle."
Freckle dipped her head to Marsh."A pleasant to meet you"
ReplyDelete(Pleasant?) :P
ReplyDelete"Same." Marsh said a bit awkwardly. "So, um, do you hunt?"
(I dont know)
ReplyDeleteFreclke looked at March.She shook he head."Oh no no no.I dont hunt,My mother says she knows how and i would like to learn."then something poped into her mind."Hey!Marsh can you teach me?"She asked
(Pleasure. :P)
ReplyDelete"Um, sure. Copy me." Marsh sank into a hunter's crouch.
Freckle crouch almost losing her balnce
ReplyDelete"Good try." Marsh corrected her. "Now try moving around."
ReplyDeletePetal stared at the tom. "So. What else am I supposed to eat? Got any ideas, GENIUS?"
ReplyDelete"Mice. Rabbits." He grabbed a huge rabbit and tossed it at Petal. "Take it. It's my apology for taking away your prey. He turned away sadly. That was all the prey he had!
ReplyDelete"I don't want it." she tossed it back. "Kits taste the best."
ReplyDeleteNight hissed. "Why don't you clear off, then. I'm offering all of my current prey to you, and you just toss is away into the dirt?" He growled. "You disgust me."
ReplyDelete"Sure." Petal sped away before he could catch her name, but looked behind her, her eyes narrowing. "But i'll be back." (Terminator, OH YEAH! :P)
ReplyDelete(jeez this is so annoying why cant she be nice for like, a SECOND)
ReplyDeleteNight sighed.
(Sorry, but that's Petal for yah)
ReplyDelete.........
Whirlstorm lowered into a crouch as she opened her mouth and smelled a rabbit, but the scent of cat was stronger than the rabbit,Whirlstorm was wary of the other cat. She couldn't tell who it was so she crept slowly toward the scent of the rabbit. Whirlstorm was about to pounce when a blur snagged the rabbit right out from in front of her paws, but by the time she jumped up to strike the cat, it was gone, taking her rabbit with them.
ReplyDeleteHelina stepped back out into the sunlight, Darren at her side. Darren was holding the rabbit. "Looking for something, Whirl?" She smiled. "Yes, it's me. That sad little kittypet begging for food when I was l lost in a snow storm. And what did you do? You left me!" She lashed her tail, and she and Darren began to circle Whirlstorm. "But now I'm a trained, lean cat, good enough to get my revenge."
ReplyDeleteWhirlstorm looked up at the two kittypets, hissing. She said plainly "Ha, lets see who is better then." She snarled at the two red maine coons. "Shall we?" Asked the grey and white she cat.
ReplyDelete"Why not." Helina growled in return. She unsheathed her claws, while her brother backed away with the rabbit in his jaws.
ReplyDeleteCherrypaw sat in camp, grooming herself.
(LOlz, i thought kittypets were docile)
ReplyDeleteWhirlstorm pounced at the Red-orange cat with her claws glinting deadly as ever in the sunlight. She hissed as she grabbed the She-cat and pulled her to the ground with full force.
(no, she's a rouge now)
ReplyDeleteHelina just grinned at Whirlstorm's move. She threw herself at Whirlstorm's face, making Whirlstorm jump back. Then she leaped on top of her, raking her claws on her back.
(oh)
ReplyDeleteHissing in pain whirlstorm lashed out with on paw and swept helina's feet out from under her. Whirlstorm leaped back and glared at darren, daring him to attack her.
Helina rolled her eyes. "Think I'm gonna give up that easily?" Helina whispered in her ear, not even a whicker length away from her. Then she shoved Whirlstorm toward the ground, then flipped onto her and began to tear at her belly.
ReplyDelete"Whirlstorm yowled in pain as she said "ha you think a little scratch will slow me down!" Whirlstorm thrust her hind legs out and sent the rouge flying. She leaped up and pounced on helina, pining down her hindpaws and ripping at her belly fur, just as she did just seconds before.
ReplyDeleteHelina gasped as all her breath was knocked out of her. But then she smiled, and nodded.
ReplyDeleteDarren came flying out of no where to knock Whirlstorm away. He lashed at her face, while Helina ripped up her tail.
Whirlstorm hissed and kicked out her hind leg to scratch the red she-cat's muzzle. Darren on the other hand recieved a bite to the neck. Whirlstorm had no mercy for a lowly rouge.
ReplyDeleteHelina lept back, Darren slipping in beside her. The two waited for Whirlstorm's next move.
ReplyDeleteThe scarlet stained pelt of the grey and white warrior circled the two red coons. Snarling she lashed out at both Darren and helina, on fore arm each and then rolled under then and turned around still anticipating a recoil.
ReplyDeleteHelina watched boredly. She yawned. "When are you going to stop using all that fancy footwork and admitt defeaf?" She asked.
ReplyDelete"Hmmm." there is no defeat, no yet." She Lashed out Biting helina"s jugular And glaring at darren as The Rouges blood spilled. Sadly, Whirlstorm said, "To bad, but there had to be a winner."She padded away and didnt look back. She knew Helina wouldnt survive long without a real medicine cat.
ReplyDeleteHelina hacked, coughing up blood. He eyes glazed and she gaged. She wailed a high pitched, screaming wail.
ReplyDeleteDarren ran to his sister. He watched her helplessly as she coughed up more and more blood, until his sister's eyes glazed, still and lifeless. He yowled to the heavens, his eyes full of sadness. With careful aim, he slowly cut open his own throat. He lay down as he died.
At the same time, a beautiful young loner gave birth to kittens. Two of them were red maine coons.
(OMG)
ReplyDeleteWhirlstorm took a quick look back to see them both lying lifelessly on the forest floor, then she ducked behind a bush and continued to pad toward the general vicinity of Mossclan.
Rain and Marsh ran through the forest and saw their friends. "NO!" Rain screamed. "HELINA!" Marsh ran over to the lifeless she-cat. "No, not Helina". He moaned softly, then stood up. "I will find their killer and have my revenge." He spun around and stalked away. Rain looked back at her friends before following reluctantly.
ReplyDeleteWhirlstorm saw a blue-grey she-cat and a brown tom standing over the two cats that she used to know as friends. She sighed and tried to forget the whole incident.
ReplyDeletePineheart padded through the unfamilar forest, trying to get used to it of course.
ReplyDeleteHoneydew looked around the forest, her ginger fur glowing in the light. The she cat scented the air and then started running towards the river. There were a few voles there and she licked her lips, smiling. Silently, she crept towards them, and then suddenly pounced. She killed them all with one swift bite and then buried them for later.
ReplyDelete*twolegs come into the forest*
ReplyDelete*twolegs bring guns and shot Thunderpaw, who runs to the med. cat for herbs, but can't find the med. cat but runs into Jaystar instead.*
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